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Jasonbolton Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Parallel Structure

Hi there, I was reading a grammar site which indicates:

"The new coach is a smart strategist, an effective manager, and works hard." is wrong because of inconsistency and the sentence should be re-written to "The new coach is a smart strategist, an effective manager, and a hard worker."

I'm not sure if the writer's comment is correct and whether the first sentence is really "wrong" as I sometimes writen it that way.

Tks,

J

  

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"The new coach is a smart strategist, an effective manager, and a hard worker."

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