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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 10 years ago
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The more attention to new ideas advertising draws, the more it helps to raise standards of living. Please correct the sentence. Thanks a lot.
  

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Try this: The more advertising draws attention to new ideas, the more it helps raise the standard of living.

  • Try this: The more advertising draws attention to new ideas, the more it helps raise the standard of living.
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Try this:
The more advertising draws attention to new ideas, the more it helps raise the standard of living.

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