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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis. I am myself a minority, have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies in general can either stimulate our creative minds by having us imagine a world beyond what is the norm to our own lives, or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives, because it may have happened to our particular self.
So, it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor was because of his inexperienced acting or maybe it was also because of how nervous he felt working w/ a big name actor or it could've been the anxiety of living in a community surrounded by negativity and needing to deal with it not by choice, but by fate.
So, it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor was because of his inexperienced acting or maybe it was also because of how nervous he felt working w/ a big name actor or it could've been the anxiety of living in a community surrounded by negativity and needing to deal with it not by choice, but by fate.
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Hi, There is no obvious connection between the second and third paragraph. The first and second paragraphs review the film and acting. The third one says something about one of protagonists of the film but he, the inexperienced and nervous actor, should have been mentioned before in two previous paragraphs, thus anchoring the last paragraph in the whole.
- Hi, There is no obvious connection between the second and third paragraph.
- The first and second paragraphs review the film and acting.
- The third one says something about one of protagonists of the film but he, the inexperienced and nervous actor, should have been mentioned before in two previous paragraphs, thus anchoring the last paragraph in the whole.
- My impression is that the third paragraph is somehow unconnected with those, preceding it.
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Hi,
There is no obvious connection between the second and third paragraph. The first and second paragraphs review the film and acting. The third one says something about one of protagonists of the film but he, the inexperienced and nervous actor, should have been mentioned before in two previous paragraphs, thus anchoring the last paragraph in the whole.
My impression is that the
There is no obvious connection between the second and third paragraph. The first and second paragraphs review the film and acting. The third one says something about one of protagonists of the film but he, the inexperienced and nervous actor, should have been mentioned before in two previous paragraphs, thus anchoring the last paragraph in the whole.
My impression is that the
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