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Should junk food and fast-food restaurants be banned? What is your view ( point)?
While it can be harmful to our health in some cases, I do not think that fast-food restaurants should be banned, because when we have some free time to go out and enjoy the company of other people we tend to go to coffee shops and restaurants to enjoy their foods.
Besides, not all fast-food restaurants are bad or unhealthy,
Some of them are approved by well-known organizations.
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While it fast food can be harmful to our health in some cases, I do not think that fast-food restaurants should be banned, because when we have some free time to go out and enjoy the company of other peopl e, we tend to go to coffee shops and such restaurants to enjoy their foods. Besides, not all fast-food restaurants are bad or unhealth y. S ome of them offer healthy options on their menus.
- While it fast food can be harmful to our health in some cases, I do not think that fast-food restaurants should be banned, because when we have some free time to go out and enjoy the company of other peopl e, we tend to go to coffee shops and such restaurants to enjoy their foods.
- Besides, not all fast-food restaurants are bad or unhealth y.
- S ome of them offer healthy options on their menus.
- are approved by well-known organizations.
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While it fast food can be harmful to our health in some cases, I do not think that fast-food restaurants should be banned, because when we have some free time to go out and enjoy the company of other people, we tend to go to coffee shops and such
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