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Careless Driving

People seem to be very careless when they ride motorcycles or drive cars. While there are many things they are careless about, the one which is becoming more and more common and which is highly dangerous is their habit of talking on the mobile phone. Recent studies report that there is a significant increase in the incidence of accidents, and nearly 30 per cent of the accidents have been caused because of drivers' using mobile phones. Although the government through many of its Road Safety campaigns have been advising the people to avoid using mobile phones while they are riding or driving, people do not seem to have taken the advice in earnest.