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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Paragraph topic sentence

can you please check my paragraph intro + the accurcy of the TS?

When someone starts talking about good students and the qualities they have,some people start to think that they have supernatural brains or extraordinary abilities. However, infact, any stundent can be one. .......................etc,

then i listed some tips, how to be a good student
  

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Hello, hindss — and welcome to English Forums. When discussing good students and their qualities, some people assert that good students have extraordinary brains or natural ability . However , the fact is that any student can achieve excellence...

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, hindss — and welcome to English Forums.
  • When discussing good students and their qualities, some people assert that good students have extraordinary brains or natural ability .
  • However , the fact is that any student can achieve excellence...
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Hello, hindss — and welcome to English Forums.

When discussing good students and their qualities, some people assert that good students have extraordinary brains or natural ability. However, the fact is that any student can achieve excellence...
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hi thank you very much this one is actually much better, but can you please point out my grammatical mistakes ?
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I have corrected any mistakes. Please compare my version with yours.
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so it's considered a grammatical mistake to say" however, infact...."??
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No, it is just stylistically bad in your sentence: too many commas.
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