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Paragraph on Animal Overpopulation please check my grammer Thanks!

0 01b00 Hi, i was wondering can some please correct my paragraph I wanted to make sure if all my grammer are correct. Thanks you very much! for those who correct my paragraph02b00.02br
00 00We lived in a world today where dogs and cats are our best friends we raised them as our pet because we enjoyed having them around they are playful, cuddle, and cute. There are times when we feel very depressed, and when these animal are around it 00 00usually brighten up my day it’s make us feel happy to be around them each and every single day, yet we lived in a world where there are too many cats and dogs roaming the street. When these animals are caught and brought into public shelters they are usually euthanized within a few days and is sad to see so many healthy dogs, cats, puppies and kittens have to be put to sleep each year in public shelters due to lack of responsible homes. I personality feel that it’s wrong to do such a thing, but when it come to overpopulation of animals in the world we must do something to control the population without that, the cities will be filled with animals running all around, the place will be a messed and complete chaos. There’s are way that we can cut back on the euthanasia of healthy animals one is when the dog or cat is completely one hundred percents healthy and active they shouldn’t be put to sleep they should be put up for adoption. Other than that if the dog or cat have reached it old age or if they are known to be aggressive than they should be put to sleep. Putting animal to sleep may be a wrong thing to do, but it can help reduce overpopulation of animal around the world. That is why we have to spayed or neutered or animals.00 0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas. You need to review punctuation:02i 02br 02br 00We01u 00 lived02u 00 in a world today where dogs and cats are our best 01u 00friends we02u 00 raised them as our 01u 00pet02u 00 because we01u 00 enjoyed02u 00 having them 01u 00around they 02u 00are playful, 01u 00cuddle02u 00, and cute. There are times when we feel very depressed, and when these animal are 01u 00around it 02u 00 00usually 01u 00brighten02u 00 up my 01u 00day it’s make 02u 00us feel happy to be around them each 01del 00and every single 02del 00day, yet we 01u 00lived02u 00 in a world where there are too many cats and dogs roaming the 01u 00street02u 00.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas.
  • You need to review punctuation:02i 02br 02br 00We01u 00 lived02u 00 in a world today where dogs and cats are our best 01u 00friends we02u 00 raised them as our 01u 00pet02u 00 because we01u 00 enjoyed02u 00 having them 01u 00around they 02u 00are playful, 01u 00cuddle02u 00, and cute.
  • There are times when we feel very depressed, and when these animal are 01u 00around it 02u 00 00usually 01u 00brighten02u 00 up my 01u 00day it’s make 02u 00us feel happy to be around them each 01del 00and every single 02del 00day, yet we 01u 00lived02u 00 in a world where there are too many cats and dogs roaming the 01u 00street02u 00.
  • When these animals are caught and brought into public 01u 00shelters they02u 00 are usually euthanized within a few days 01u 00and is02u 00 sad to 01u 00see so02u 00 many healthy dogs, cats, puppies and kittens have to be put to sleep each year in public shelters due 01u 00to lack 02u 00of responsible homes.
  • I 01u 00personality02u 00 feel that 01u 00it’s02u 00 wrong to do such a thing, but when it 01u 00come02u 00 to overpopulation of animals in the01u 00 world we02u 00 must do something to control the population without01u 00 that, the 02u 00cities will be filled with animals running all around, the place will be a 01u 00messed 02u 00and complete chaos.
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