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I heard a music style that I had never heard before; it was played with accordion, violin, and a piece of iron triangular. This style of music, that I discovered that is called Cajun, has an exciting and danceable sound.
  

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I heard a music style that I had never heard before; it was played with accordion, violin, and triangle. This style of music, which I discovered is called Cajun, has an exciting and danceable sound.

  • I heard a music style that I had never heard before; it was played with accordion, violin, and triangle.
  • This style of music, which I discovered is called Cajun, has an exciting and danceable sound.
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I heard a music style that I had never heard before; it was played with accordion, violin, and triangle. This style of music, which I discovered is called Cajun, has an exciting and danceable sound.

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