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Mariella Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Paragraph for motivational letter

Could anybody please help me with this paragraph which is a part of my motivational letter for MA in tourism. I want to emphasise that one of the reasons why I chose this uni is that offers the opportunity to meet people from around the world which I find extremely beneficial when studying tourism. So, am I on the right track or should I change something?

Here it comes:

Living and working in X, a tourist city, gives me the opportunity to interact with others from all over the world. Similarly, I look forward to attending your university and acquiring knowledge in a global environment / through international educational experience.
  

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At first write down a draft and post it. Hopefully somebody will help you to modify your motivation letter. Are you going to apply for Switzerland?

  • At first write down a draft and post it.
  • Hopefully somebody will help you to modify your motivation letter.
  • Are you going to apply for Switzerland?
  • I am also interested to apply the same programme in a Swiss University.
  • Mizanur
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At first write down a draft and post it. Hopefully somebody will help you to modify your motivation letter.

Are you going to apply for Switzerland? I am also interested to apply the same programme in a Swiss University.

Mizanur

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