Could anybody please help me with this paragraph which is a part of my motivational letter for MA in tourism. I want to emphasise that one of the reasons why I chose this uni is that offers the opportunity to meet people from around the world which I find extremely beneficial when studying tourism. So, am I on the right track or should I change something?
Here it comes:
Living and working in X, a tourist city, gives me the opportunity to interact with others from all over the world. Similarly, I look forward to attending your university and acquiring knowledge in a global environment / through international educational experience.
Top answer
At first write down a draft and post it. Hopefully somebody will help you to modify your motivation letter. Are you going to apply for Switzerland?
— Mizanur
At first write down a draft and post it.
Hopefully somebody will help you to modify your motivation letter.
Are you going to apply for Switzerland?
I am also interested to apply the same programme in a Swiss University.
Mizanur
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