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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
paragraph correction, thanks a lot for your helps
Cleaning
We cleaned up the whole house with my mother within a few days working restless down to dusk, we laid carpets in the floor of the rooms, arranged the stuff in the rooms and made it home to sit in. I helped my mother constantly. Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved in newly. We were both too tired of work.
We cleaned up the whole house with my mother within a few days working restless down to dusk, we laid carpets in the floor of the rooms, arranged the stuff in the rooms and made it home to sit in. I helped my mother constantly. Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved in newly. We were both too tired of work.
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Help is non-count. We do not use the plural form: help s. ) from d a wn to dusk, (comma splice error) we laid carpets on the floor s of the rooms, arranged the furnishings in the rooms and made it a home to live in.
- Help is non-count.
- We do not use the plural form: help s.
- ) from d a wn to dusk, (comma splice error) we laid carpets on the floor s of the rooms, arranged the furnishings in the rooms and made it a home to live in.
- I helped my mother constantly.
- Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved in to newly .
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Help is non-count. We do not use the plural form: helps.
We cleaned up the whole house with my (If "we" is you, your sisters and brothers, then use "our") mother within a few days working restlessly (You probably meant relentlessly.) from dawn to dusk, (comma splice error) we laid carpets on the floors of
We cleaned up the whole house with my (If "we" is you, your sisters and brothers, then use "our") mother within a few days working restlessly (You probably meant relentlessly.) from dawn to dusk, (comma splice error) we laid carpets on the floors of
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Ooouups, Yes I just noticed your fragment error mark!
How about this one?
Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved into, I preferred not to go out instead help my mother. We were both too tired of working.
thanks
How about this one?
Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved into, I preferred not to go out instead help my mother. We were both too tired of working.
thanks
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Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved into, I preferred not to go out but (you need a conjunction here) instead help my mother. We were both too tired of working.
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Thanks a lot my dear teacher,
Here it is;
Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved into, I preferred not to go out but help my mother with the cleaning instead. We were both too tired of working at the end of the day.
regards,
osman
Here it is;
Since I knew no one in this city that we had just moved into, I preferred not to go out but help my mother with the cleaning instead. We were both too tired of working at the end of the day.
regards,
osman
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