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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Paragraph correction
Hi, please help me correct my paragraph below if there are any mistakes. Thank you.
Shelby Adams is struggling with her husband, Grant, who has a low-paying job and no prospects of bettering their future. Desperate to make money, Shelby decides to turn in her housewife apron to become a hot shot real estate agent. But soon, her life turns in danger when she takes a job with a corrupt boss who will do anything to land a deal.
Shelby Adams is struggling with her husband, Grant, who has a low-paying job and no prospects of bettering their future. Desperate to make money, Shelby decides to turn in her housewife apron to become a hot shot real estate agent. But soon, her life turns in danger when she takes a job with a corrupt boss who will do anything to land a deal.
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Anonymous Shelby decides to turn in her housewife apron to become a ho t-s hot rea l-e state agent. But soon, her life turns in danger she faces trouble when she takes a job starts working for with a corrupt boss who will do anything to land a deal.
- Anonymous Shelby decides to turn in her housewife apron to become a ho t-s hot rea l-e state agent.
- But soon, her life turns in danger she faces trouble when she takes a job starts working for with a corrupt boss who will do anything to land a deal.
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AnonymousShelby decides to turn in her housewife apron to become a hot-shot real-estate agent. But soon,her life turns in dangershe faces trouble when shetakes a jobstarts working forwitha corrupt boss who will do anything to land a deal.
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