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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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The first and second directions are a go and I'm glad we've gotten that cleared up. I'll ask Alice which model number and color combination you've selected and please pay my dad accordingly. As for the remote control, my implication was the hand held control as they're both hand held devices that send signals to an apparatus. I think the proper term should be hand control 'cause it's wireless but sorry for the confusion and please disregard it.
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The first and second directions are a go and I'm glad we've gotten that cleared up. I'll ask Alice which model number and color combination you've selected and please pay my dad accordingly. As for the remote control, my implication was the hand held control as they're both hand held devices that send signals to an apparatus. I think the proper term should be hand control 'cause it's wireless but sorry for the confusion and please disregard it.
Is this paragraph ok? Thanks!
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Hi, I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected and please pay my dad accordingly, thank you. As for the remote control, my implication was the hand held control as they're both hand held devices that send signals to an apparatus. are these sentences correct?
- Hi, I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected and please pay my dad accordingly, thank you.
- As for the remote control, my implication was the hand held control as they're both hand held devices that send signals to an apparatus.
- are these sentences correct?
- I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected.
- Please pay my dad accordingly.
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Hi,
I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected and please pay my dad accordingly, thank you. As for the remote control, my implication was the hand held control as they're both hand held devices that send signals to an apparatus.
are these sentences correct?
I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected. Please pa
I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected and please pay my dad accordingly, thank you. As for the remote control, my implication was the hand held control as they're both hand held devices that send signals to an apparatus.
are these sentences correct?
I'll ask Alice which model number and color preference you've selected. Please pa
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The first and second directions are a go, and I'm glad we've gotten that cleared up. I'll ask Alice which model number and color combination you've selected, and please pay my dad accordingly.
As for the remote control, my implication was the hand-held control, as they're both hand-held devices that send signals to an apparatus. I think the proper term should be hand control, because i
As for the remote control, my implication was the hand-held control, as they're both hand-held devices that send signals to an apparatus. I think the proper term should be hand control, because i
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