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Saadon and Timah reminisce their memories of fasting and the celebration of Ramadan. They go down the memory lane from their childhood days till they are both married.

  

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anonymous Saadon and Timah (often/sometimes) reminisce their memories of fasting and the celebration of Ramadan. They (would) go down the memory lane thinking of the time beginning childhood to the time they got married . Words in brackets make the use of simple present apt.

  • anonymous Saadon and Timah (often/sometimes) reminisce their memories of fasting and the celebration of Ramadan.
  • They (would) go down the memory lane thinking of the time beginning childhood to the time they got married .
  • Words in brackets make the use of simple present apt.
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anonymousSaadon and Timah (often/sometimes) reminisce their memories of fasting and the celebration of Ramadan. They (would) go down the memory lane thinking of the time beginning childhood to the time they got married.
Words in brackets make the use of simple present apt.
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Do you ever take a trip down memory lane? This movie follows a married couple, Saadon and Timah, who reminisce their memories of fasting and the celebration of Ramadan from their childhood days till their marriage. When they reminisce, it makes them want to travel back in time to enjoy fun experiences again.

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