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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Paragraph Checking

How would you rewrite the following paragraph in a more natural way? Does it sound natural to you?

??It is a fact that whilst some students think having a good knowledge in grammar is important because they have to take some English proficiency tests frequently to get acceptance by university or for other reasons, some think it is a more valuable asset to have the ability to express themselves comfortably in a fluent way in the global world. From this point of view, as language teacher trainers, do you think the ideal EFL classes should be more of communicative based, and less than of a grammar based approach?
  

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There is no "Edit" Button when I visit this website through my mobile phone. So I am writing my paragraph again eith some editing on it. Could you please have a look at the following paragraph instead?

  • There is no "Edit" Button when I visit this website through my mobile phone.
  • So I am writing my paragraph again eith some editing on it.
  • Could you please have a look at the following paragraph instead?
  • It is a fact that whilst some students think having a good knowledge in grammar is more important in English classes because they have to take some English proficiency tests frequently to get acceptance by university or for other reasons, some think it is a more valuable asset to have the ability to express themselves comfortably in a fluent way in the global world.
  • From this point of view, as language teacher trainers, do you think the ideal EFL classes should be more of communicative based, and less than of a grammar based approach?
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There is no "Edit" Button when I visit this website through my mobile phone. So I am writing my paragraph again eith some editing on it. Could you please have a look at the following paragraph instead?

It is a fact that whilst some students think having a good knowledge in grammar is more important in English classes because they have to take some English proficiency tests frequently to g

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