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Amongst other themed communities, I decided to choose Science and Technology Community and there are particular reasons behind giving it preference over others. Most importantly, I have been admitted in engineering programme and by being surrounded by people who's interest primarily lies in science and engineering, I believe this will not only substantially enhance my knowledge but theirs too. Moreover, I would feel much comfortable with people of same program as me as I can discuss problems I might have been facing with other students and I believe they wouldn't hesitate asking the questions with me too. In this way, it will not only enhance the collaboration amongst us but will also play a pivotal role in brushing up on our oral and communication skills.
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Amongst other themed communities, I decided to choose Science and Technology Community , and there are particular reasons behind giving it preference over others. Most importantly, I have been admitted in engineering programme and , by being surrounded by people whose interest primarily lies in science and engineering, I believe this will not only substantially enhance my knowledge , but theirs too. Moreover, I would feel much comfortable with people of same program as me , as I would be able to discuss problems I might have been facing with other students and I believe they wouldn't hesitate asking me their questions with me too.
- Amongst other themed communities, I decided to choose Science and Technology Community , and there are particular reasons behind giving it preference over others.
- Most importantly, I have been admitted in engineering programme and , by being surrounded by people whose interest primarily lies in science and engineering, I believe this will not only substantially enhance my knowledge , but theirs too.
- Moreover, I would feel much comfortable with people of same program as me , as I would be able to discuss problems I might have been facing with other students and I believe they wouldn't hesitate asking me their questions with me too.
- In this way, it will not only enhance the collaboration amongst us , but will also play a pivotal role in brushing up on our oral and communication skills.
- I think this would be the correct way, however: 1) I added a few commas, which would make the text look better to me, but I don't know if it's necessary or not.
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