Paragraph about my favourite famous person. Can you help me evaluate this passage? please!
I love him for his appearance, talent, and personality. The first time I had seen him, I was attracted by a handsome face with warm smiles, heart-shaped lips, and curly hair. Moreover, although he is 25 years old, he had become a famous singer, actor, and composer in Viet Nam with the largest number of fans. He represents true emotions, hopes, and breakups, which most people have come through as well. Unlike many successful superstars, Son Tung lives very comfortably with his colleagues and fans. Besides, he is an assertive person due to he never hesitates and gives up. For example, he had received a lot of criticism from other celebrities and many viewers, even his father, but he always pursued his passion until now He often gives young viewers a lot of inspirational life lessons.
With wonderful talent and character, Son Tung convinces me that he will be more successful. I hope to meet him in the future.
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anonymousI love him for his appearance
Hello Anonymous;
If you want my feedback, you will have to register here. I do not spend time and effort on people who don't take the few seconds of time to register. All these anonymous posts are all lumped together and do not reflect the work of individual students.
Registration is completely free. There
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