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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Paragraph about 'get away desire'

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People often feel like forgetting about all the conventions of everyday life and going to some faraway place. However, very few of them can actually do so. In most cases, they can only dream of it, which makes them wish for it even more.
  

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teacherJapan People often feel like forgetting (all) about all the conventions of everyday life their daily obligations and going to some faraway place. However, very few (o f the m) can actually do so. In most cases, they can only dream of it, which makes them wish for it even more.

— Teechr

  • teacherJapan People often feel like forgetting (all) about all the conventions of everyday life their daily obligations and going to some faraway place.
  • However, very few (o f the m) can actually do so.
  • In most cases, they can only dream of it, which makes them wish for it even more.
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teacherJapanPeople often feel like forgetting (all) about all the conventions of everyday life their daily obligations and going to some faraway place. However, very few (of them) can actually do so. In most cases, they can only dream of it, which makes them wish for it even more.
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Thank you very much, teechr:-)
Is my way of using 'it' (dream of it/wish for it) is ok? I don't want to repeat 'do so' so many times, so I prefer to use 'it.'
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teacherJapanIs my way of using 'it' (dream of it/wish for it) is okay?
Yes, it's OK.
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Thank you very much again. :-)
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teacherJapan Thank you very much again.
You're welcome, but please do not use combinations of punctuation marks as emoticons; just use the emoticons available on the toolbar.
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