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Christine Christie Posted 4 years ago
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Is this paragraph correct:




"Even though, Covid has initially appeared in November 2019 in the Chinese city of Wuhan, the year of 2020 will be recorded in history as the year in which this epidemic had propagated to the rest of the world, having converted into a pandemic.

But at least for me, the year of 2020 will always be badly remembered for other reasons."


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" "Badly remembered" sounds like you can't remember it well. "The year of 2020" is not exactly wrong, but I would expect "the year 2020" or simply "2020". " We have good years/days/months and bad ones.

  • " "Badly remembered" sounds like you can't remember it well.
  • "The year of 2020" is not exactly wrong, but I would expect "the year 2020" or simply "2020".
  • " We have good years/days/months and bad ones.
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Christine ChristieIs this paragraph correct:

The perfect tenses are not called for, the comma is wrong, and things don't convert into things: "Even though Covid initially appeared in November 2019 in the Chinese city of Wuhan, the year of 2020 will be recorded in history as the year in which this epidemic propagated to the rest of the world, having become a

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