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Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
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Is this paragraph correct:


"We went out to explore the locality.

Up to one point, we came across a castle in ruins.

As we passed by the rearguard, we stooped and stayed looking at that structure."



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Christine Christie "We went out to explore the locality. OK. Christine Christie Up to one point, we came across a castle in ruins.

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  • Christine Christie "We went out to explore the locality.
  • OK.
  • Christine Christie Up to one point, we came across a castle in ruins.
  • "Up to one point" is wrong.
  • You mean "at one point", maybe.
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Christine Christie"We went out to explore the locality.

OK.

Christine ChristieUp to one point, we came across a castle in ruins.

"Up to one point" is wrong. You mean "at one point", maybe. Also, I don't like "castle in ruins". You came across the ruins of a castle.

Christine ChristieAs w
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rearguard: the part of an army that is responsible for preventing it from being attacked from behind

Are you talking about a structure that's part of the castle?

moat, battlements, keep, bailey, tower, drawbridge?

CJ

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