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On the first day of school, Victor stood in line half an hour before he came to a wobbly card table. He was handed a packet of papers and a computer card on which he listed his one elective, French. He already spoke Spanish and English, but he thought someday he might travel to France, where it was cool; not like Fresno, where summer days reached 110 degrees in the shade. There were rivers in France, and huge churches, and fair-skinned people everywhere, the way there were brown people all around Victor.
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On the first day of ,school, Victor stood in line half an hour before he came to a wobbly card table. He was handed a packet of papers , comma and a computer card on which he listed his one elective, French. He already spoke Spanish and English, but he thought someday he might travel to France, where it was cool, unlike Fresno, where summer days reached 110 degrees in the shade.
- On the first day of ,school, Victor stood in line half an hour before he came to a wobbly card table.
- He was handed a packet of papers , comma and a computer card on which he listed his one elective, French.
- He already spoke Spanish and English, but he thought someday he might travel to France, where it was cool, unlike Fresno, where summer days reached 110 degrees in the shade.
- There were rivers in France, and huge churches, and fair-skinned people everywhere, j ust as there were lots of brown people where Victor currently lived.
- I don't see why you have included the last sentence in this paragraph.
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On the first day of ,school, Victor stood in line half an hour before he came to a wobbly card table. He was handed a packet of papers, comma and a computer card on which he listed his one elective, French. He already spoke Spanish and English, but he thought someday he might travel to France, where it was cool, unlike Fresno, where summer days reached 110 degrees in the shade.
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