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"I have always appreciated vegetarianism both for the ethical treatment for animals as well as for weight maintenance and even for health enhancement, but due to culture and family influences, I had never previously found the necessary motivation to live by those values.
But as a yoga instructor, I feel I finally now have the grounds to base my convictions, and to stand firm towards others about it whenever necessary."Top answer
Hi I think that's good - I understood it easily (and I liked it). Strictly, I think I would change one preposition with: 'the ethical treatment of animals'. You now feel you have the grounds to base your convictions and to stand firm towards others.
- Hi I think that's good - I understood it easily (and I liked it).
- Strictly, I think I would change one preposition with: 'the ethical treatment of animals'.
- You now feel you have the grounds to base your convictions and to stand firm towards others.
- Yes, that sounds good.
- Dave
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I think that's good - I understood it easily (and I liked it).
Strictly, I think I would change one preposition with: 'the ethical treatment of animals'.
You now feel you have the grounds to base your convictions and to stand firm towards others. Yes, that sounds good.
Dave
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