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"I always jog in leggings, with an old T-shirt, and with some brandless sneakers, I sweat almost from the beginning; and almost always I feel in so much pain that I can’t think about anything or even look at anyone or anything around for too long. I just fix a point in front of me, count every lap I complete, and often long for my ordeal to be over."
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The vocabulary is OK, but I'd make a couple of changes to it, and to the punctuation. I always jog in leggings, an old T-shirt, and some off-brand sneakers . I sweat almost from the beginning (or I start sweating almost immediately ) , and I almost always feel in so much pain that I can’t think about anything , or even look at anyone or anything around for too long.
- The vocabulary is OK, but I'd make a couple of changes to it, and to the punctuation.
- I always jog in leggings, an old T-shirt, and some off-brand sneakers .
- I sweat almost from the beginning (or I start sweating almost immediately ) , and I almost always feel in so much pain that I can’t think about anything , or even look at anyone or anything around for too long.
- I just fix on a point in front of me, count every lap I complete, and often long for my ordeal to be over.
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The vocabulary is OK, but I'd make a couple of changes to it, and to the punctuation.
I always jog in leggings, an old T-shirt, and some off-brand sneakers. I sweat almost from the beginni
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