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"D&C has a special promotion: if you do shopping in their store up to 150 Euros, they will award you a 1 year membership at Holmes Pace gym."
Note: By 'to 150 Euros', I mean if all your shopping reaches 150 Euros.
(By the way, is it correct to say "if all your shopping reaches…?)
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Here's how you do that in English. D&C has a special promotion. You get a one-year membership at Holmes Pace Gym with a purchase of 150 euros or more.
- Here's how you do that in English.
- D&C has a special promotion.
- You get a one-year membership at Holmes Pace Gym with a purchase of 150 euros or more.
- CJ By the way, the last time you wrote about it, it was Holmes Place .
- Which is it?
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Here's how you do that in English.
D&C has a special promotion. You get a one-year membership at Holmes Pace Gym with a purchase of 150 euros or more.
CJ
By the way, the last time you wrote about it, it was Holmes Place. Which is it? Place or Pace?
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