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Christine Christie Posted 6 years ago
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"There is an PRE-ARRANGED ORDER as people leave the presidential plane. First, the presidential couple EXIT, and only after them, their children, regardless of how young they are."

  

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Christine Christie There is an a prearranged PRE-ARRANGED ORDER as people leave the presidential plane. First, the presidential couple EXIT, and only after them, their children, regardless of how young they are. OK as shown.

— CalifJim

  • Christine Christie There is an a prearranged PRE-ARRANGED ORDER as people leave the presidential plane.
  • First, the presidential couple EXIT, and only after them, their children, regardless of how young they are.
  • OK as shown.
  • "prearranged" doesn't quite say it, though.
  • I'd use "predetermined" instead.
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Christine ChristieThere is an a prearranged PRE-ARRANGED ORDER as people leave the presidential plane. First, the presidential couple EXIT, and only after them, their children, regardless of how young they are.

OK as shown. "prearranged" doesn't quite say it, though.

I'd use "predetermined" instead. Even "specific" would

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