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Mrs. Brown’s next target was an Italian restaurant. There she saw people eating risotto, carpaccio, spaghetti and ravioli, “Fluffy would love that!” She thought to herself. But again she didn’t see Fluffy. Then out of nowhere an orange tail appeared from behind a dining chair, but it disappeared before she could reach it.

  

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Mrs. Brown’s next target was an Italian restaurant. There she saw people eating risotto, carpaccio, spaghetti and ravioli.

  • Mrs.
  • Brown’s next target was an Italian restaurant.
  • There she saw people eating risotto, carpaccio, spaghetti and ravioli.
  • ” she thought.
  • But again she didn’t see Fluffy.
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Mrs. Brown’s next target was an Italian restaurant. There she saw people eating risotto, carpaccio, spaghetti and ravioli. “Fluffy would love that!” she thought. But again she didn’t see Fluffy. Then out of nowhere an orange tail appeared from behind a dining chair, but it disappeared before she could reach it.

Much better.

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