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Ty123 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this okay: My best friend and I had the pleasure of taking the junior surf team to a Lakers game today! I really hope the kids and coaches had a good time at the game. I remember when I was a kid watching the NBA on NBC and I said to myself one day I’m gonna get court-side seats to my favorite team and invite all my friends and family. It feels great to share the thing you love with other people, and to see their faces light up in jubilation during their first live NBA experience is really something special!
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You need quotation marks around your quote, and your last sentence is mixed construction. You started the sentence heading in one way, and then you seem to have forgotten the beiginnng of the sentence when you were ending it.
- You need quotation marks around your quote, and your last sentence is mixed construction.
- You started the sentence heading in one way, and then you seem to have forgotten the beiginnng of the sentence when you were ending it.
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You need quotation marks around your quote, and your last sentence is mixed construction. You started the sentence heading in one way, and then you seem to have forgotten the beiginnng of the sentence when you were ending it.
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