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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences. Are they well written?
1. Aaliyah, a young woman who has no purpose in life takes a challenge from his father to find a job. Managed to be a tuition teacher, will her life improve?
2. Aaliyah is a young woman whose life turns upside-down, is challenged by her father to be independent. She managed to get a job offer as a tuition teacher for a daughter of a businessman, and at the same time become his assistant to help out with clerical works, guided from a book left by his deceased wife.
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anonymous 1. Aaliyah, a young woman who has no purpose in life takes accepts a challenge from his her father to find a job. She m anag es to find a job as a tutor, but/so be a tuition teacher, will her life improve?
- anonymous 1.
- Aaliyah, a young woman who has no purpose in life takes accepts a challenge from his her father to find a job.
- She m anag es to find a job as a tutor, but/so be a tuition teacher, will her life improve?
- anonymous 2.
- Aaliya h, is a young woman whose life turns is upside-dow n is challenged by her father to be independent.
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anonymous1. Aaliyah, a young woman who has no purpose in lifetakesaccepts a challenge fromhisher father to find a job. She manages to find a job as a tutor, but/so
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