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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Hi, are these sentences grammatically correct?

1. When Edmund’s abilities returned, Kelvin, Edmund’s partner brings him back to duty to identify the key suspects of the mystery around Elvis’s death, a mayoral election candidate.

2. When Edmund’s abilities returned he aided by her partner, Kelvin, to investigates the mystery around Elvis’s death, a candidate in mayoral election. The killer has left various toy paraphernalia around Elvin’s body, which Edmund recognises as being from an old children’s cartoon, “Inspector Tom”. Edmund inspects Elvin’s body and forms the police’s first profile of the killer, named Tom.

  

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1. When Edmund’s abilities return , Kelvin, Edmund’s partner, brings him back to duty to identify the key suspects of the mystery around the Elvis’s death of Elvis , a mayoral election candidate. Based on the edits above, you can fix the next sentences.

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  • When Edmund’s abilities return , Kelvin, Edmund’s partner, brings him back to duty to identify the key suspects of the mystery around the Elvis’s death of Elvis , a mayoral election candidate.
  • Based on the edits above, you can fix the next sentences.
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1. When Edmund’s abilities return, Kelvin, Edmund’s partner, brings him back to duty to identify the key suspects of the mystery around the Elvis’s death of Elvis, a mayoral election candidate.


Based on the edits above, you can fix the next sentences.

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Thank you very much for your kind help.

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