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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Paragraph

Hi, is this paragraph grammatically correct?

Two young people who fall in love but are hounded by the ghost of a murdered moneylender who seeks revenge, which leaves a lasting effect on the couple.
  

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I would not agree that you have a paragraph in your question. "

  • I would not agree that you have a paragraph in your question.
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I would not agree that you have a paragraph in your question.

I would insert a comma after "moneylender..."

I think you could omit "but."

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