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Apprentice123 Posted 10 years ago
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Does anyone can check problems in my paragraph, please?
As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was not only a game; nevertheless, that day was an adventure.
Does anyone can check problems in my paragraph, please?
As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was not only a game; nevertheless, that day was an adventure.
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I would make a couple of corrections: First, you need the possessive (cousin's). Second, you need to complete the comparison correctly (Not only/ but also). As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game.
- I would make a couple of corrections: First, you need the possessive (cousin's).
- Second, you need to complete the comparison correctly (Not only/ but also).
- As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game.
- Now, as an adult, I know that day was not only a game , but also an adventure.
- "Nevertheless" implies an exception , not an addition.
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I would make a couple of corrections:
First, you need the possessive (cousin's). Second, you need to complete the comparison correctly (Not only/ but also).
As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was not only a game, but also an adventure.
"Nevertheless" implies an exception, n
First, you need the possessive (cousin's). Second, you need to complete the comparison correctly (Not only/ but also).
As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was not only a game, but also an adventure.
"Nevertheless" implies an exception, n
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Very well, then say:
As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was indeed a game; nevertheless, it was also an adventure.
Does that work for you?
As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was indeed a game; nevertheless, it was also an adventure.
Does that work for you?
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Doctor DVery well, then say:As a child, I thought that when I slept at my cousin's house, it was a game. Now, as an adult, I know that day was indeed a game; nevertheless, it was also an adventure.Does that work for you?Yes. Thank you
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