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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Hi, Hey guys,
I'm in bangkok, staying at the convenient airport hotel. Sorry I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to Jacki, the car was waiting for me and I didn't want to keep them waiting. But I had a great time here, especially with the wildlife, the elephants were fascinating and the tigers were um...scary....It was really cool taking everything in and just spending time trotting around in the rural, time away from the city once in a while is definitely a good way to stop thinking about reality.
Anyway, I'm not gonna go on, probably boring you guys already..Thanks so much for asking me to come along, it's been a wonderful week for me, hope you guys have the best time in Thailand.
Please proofread for me. Thank you.
I'm in bangkok, staying at the convenient airport hotel. Sorry I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to Jacki, the car was waiting for me and I didn't want to keep them waiting. But I had a great time here, especially with the wildlife, the elephants were fascinating and the tigers were um...scary....It was really cool taking everything in and just spending time trotting around in the rural, time away from the city once in a while is definitely a good way to stop thinking about reality.
Anyway, I'm not gonna go on, probably boring you guys already..Thanks so much for asking me to come along, it's been a wonderful week for me, hope you guys have the best time in Thailand.
Please proofread for me. Thank you.
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It seems to me that you want to do this in a very casual style that does not necessarily follow the grammatical rules to the letter. I'll proofread and make my suggestions with that assumption in mind. I'm in Bangkok, staying at a hotel near the airport.
- It seems to me that you want to do this in a very casual style that does not necessarily follow the grammatical rules to the letter.
- I'll proofread and make my suggestions with that assumption in mind.
- I'm in Bangkok, staying at a hotel near the airport.
- Sorry I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to Jacki.
- The car was waiting for me and I didn't want to keep them waiting.
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It seems to me that you want to do this in a very casual style that does not necessarily follow the grammatical rules to the letter. I'll proofread and make my suggestions with that assumption in mind.
I'm in Bangkok, staying at a hotel near the airport. Sorry I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to Jacki. The car was waiting for me and I didn't want to keep them waiting. But I had a
I'm in Bangkok, staying at a hotel near the airport. Sorry I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to Jacki. The car was waiting for me and I didn't want to keep them waiting. But I had a
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