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Tina White Posted 16 years ago
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Would anyone be able to check this paragraph for errors for me. thanks
My name is Christina White. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and I work at the Moncton Hospital. I have been with the hospital for the past eight years. I am currently taking upgrading through correspondence with the New Brunswick Community College in Moncton, NB. I am taking the following courses: English 122, Chemistry 112 and Math 112. The reason I am taking these courses is so I can apply to enter the RN program at UNB, Moncton; my goal is to be enrolled, in the RN program, by the fall of 2011. I have so many friends, who are RN’s, who keep telling to me to go for it. I hope I can do it! “I will do it!” But I can’t help but keep asking myself, can I really do this? If I am unable to complete these courses, it will be heart-breaking. Well it’s getting late-after 3am in the morning-I’m heading to bed. Night all, sweet dreams!
My name is Christina White. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and I work at the Moncton Hospital. I have been with the hospital for the past eight years. I am currently taking upgrading through correspondence with the New Brunswick Community College in Moncton, NB. I am taking the following courses: English 122, Chemistry 112 and Math 112. The reason I am taking these courses is so I can apply to enter the RN program at UNB, Moncton; my goal is to be enrolled, in the RN program, by the fall of 2011. I have so many friends, who are RN’s, who keep telling to me to go for it. I hope I can do it! “I will do it!” But I can’t help but keep asking myself, can I really do this? If I am unable to complete these courses, it will be heart-breaking. Well it’s getting late-
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Hello, Tina-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas In addition, please revise to eliminate the repetitions of 'taking': My name is Christina White. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and I work at the Moncton Hospital.
- Hello, Tina-- and welcome to English Forums.
- I have underlined some problem areas In addition, please revise to eliminate the repetitions of 'taking': My name is Christina White.
- I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and I work at the Moncton Hospital.
- I have been with the hospital for the past eight years.
- I am currently taking upgrading through correspondence with the New Brunswick Community College in Moncton, NB.
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Hello, Tina-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas In addition, please revise to eliminate the repetitions of 'taking':
My name is Christina White. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and I work at the Moncton Hospital. I have been with the hospital for the past eight years. I am currently taking upgrading through correspondence wit
My name is Christina White. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and I work at the Moncton Hospital. I have been with the hospital for the past eight years. I am currently taking upgrading through correspondence wit
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