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Egyptian2007 Posted 19 years ago
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01i00“Participation in decision-making is something that is missing at the administrative level. There is participation, but it is ineffective. I might contribute my opinion, yet what is more important is that this opinion be taken into account. As I see it, participation in decision-making means that your opinion be considered. Yes, we participate, but what happens in the end is that we cannot overstep the superior directives and instructions”.02i0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Could you please revise this paragraph for me? 02font 02br 02br 01i 01font 00“Participation in decision-making is something that is missing at the administrative level. There is participation, but it is ineffective.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Could you please revise this paragraph for me?
  • 02font 02br 02br 01i 01font 00“Participation in decision-making is something that is missing at the administrative level.
  • There is participation, but it is ineffective.
  • I might contribute my opinion, yet what is more important is that this opinion be taken into account.
  • As I see it, participation in decision-making means that your opinion be considered.
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0Hi,02br
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01i01font00“Participation in decision-making is something that is missing at the administrative level. There is participation, but it is ineffective. I might contrib
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0 This was a quick reply.Thanks Clive. 0-
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