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Egyptian2007 Posted 19 years ago
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00Could you please check this paragraph for me? Does it make sense?02br
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00"Some participants reported incidents which support their claims regarding the superficiality that characterizes the work of the TEU. For example, one head of department from school B told me that the TEU supervisor at his school used to ask him to provide her with a copy of the lecture he was intending to deliver at the training course as a proof of the training, whether or not he had actually given it".0-
  

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0Hi,02br
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01cite10Egyptian200712cite10Hi!12br
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10Could you please check this paragraph for me? Does it make sense?12br
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10"Some participants reported incidents which 11del10support12del10 11b11font10supported12font12b
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0Hi,02br
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01font00My doubt is how could something happened at a certain point of time in the past supports and characterizes another thing now; isn't this a bit illogical?02font02br
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00Not really. eg The general won victories in 2006, and in 2005, and in 2004. Today, these support his claim that he will win the
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01cite10Clive12cite10Hi,12br
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11font10My doubt is how could something happened at a certain point of time in the past supports and characterizes another thing now; isn't this a bit illogical?12font12br
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10Not really. eg The general won victories in 2006
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0Hi,02br
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00The structure of my example is the same as that of the base paragraph. I just made it simpler and easier to understand.02br
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00Best wishes, Clive0-
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10Hi,12br
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10The structure of my example is the same as that of the base paragraph. I just made it simpler and easier to understand.12br
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10Best wishes, Clive12br
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10Thanks again for your quick reply, Clive
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0Hi,02br
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01i00Do you mean that the following could be correct semantically?02i02br
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01font01b001. The meteorologist claimed that it will be fine tomorrow.02b02font00 00Yes.02br
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01font01b002. The police claimed that t
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0Hi,02br
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01i00Do you mean that the following could be correct semantically?02i02br
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01font01b001. The meteorologist claimed that it will be fine tomorrow.02b02font00 00Yes.02br
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01font01b002. The police claimed that t
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