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Egyptian2007 Posted 19 years ago
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01 b 00 As perceived by participants, the BOT is a new version of the former Board of Parents and Teachers that has existed for many years until the new board was put in practice in the academic year 2005/2006. Participants’ perceptions of this new version varied considerably as revealed by data analysis. In fact, three distinctive stances emerged: while many participants held positive views about the BOT, many others held negative views, and a few maintained a neutral position, refraining from making any judgements about this innovation which they described as 01 i 00 ‘a new thing’ 02 i 00 that is yet to be assessed. 02 b 0-
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01 b 00 As perceived by participants, the BOT is a new version of the former Board of Parents and Teachers that has existed for many years until the new board was put in practice in the academic year 2005/2006. Participants’ perceptions of this new version varied considerably as revealed by data analysis. In fact, three distinctive stances emerged: while many participants held positive views about the BOT, many others held negative views, and a few maintained a neutral position, refraining from making any judgements about this innovation which they described as 01 i 00 ‘a new thing’ 02 i 00 that is yet to be assessed. 02 b 0-
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0 A little wordy, I would suggest, Egyptian. I would fix it something like this: 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 The BOT is a new version of the former Board of Parents and Teachers 01 b 00 that existed 02 b 00 for many years 01 b 00 before 02 b 00 the new board was 01 b 00 initiated 02 b 00 in the academic year 2005/2006. 01 b 00 As revealed by data analysis, p 02 b 00 articipants’ perceptions of this new version varied considerably.
- 0 A little wordy, I would suggest, Egyptian.
- I would fix it something like this: 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 The BOT is a new version of the former Board of Parents and Teachers 01 b 00 that existed 02 b 00 for many years 01 b 00 before 02 b 00 the new board was 01 b 00 initiated 02 b 00 in the academic year 2005/2006.
- 01 b 00 As revealed by data analysis, p 02 b 00 articipants’ perceptions of this new version varied considerably.
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0 A little wordy, I would suggest, Egyptian. I would fix it something like this: 02 br
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01 i 00 The BOT is a new version of the former Board of Parents and Teachers 01 b 00 that existed 02 b 00 for many years 01 b 00 before 02 b 00 the new board was 01 b 00 initiated 02 b 00 in the academic year 2005/2006. 01 b
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01 i 00 The BOT is a new version of the former Board of Parents and Teachers 01 b 00 that existed 02 b 00 for many years 01 b 00 before 02 b 00 the new board was 01 b 00 initiated 02 b 00 in the academic year 2005/2006. 01 b
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