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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Paragrah

id thanked academy and took my award home and put it on the table and my wife pointed to the shellph and told me to put it over their while i was placing the award on the shelf the dog who was black tripped me
  

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Hi, My first reaction is that you need to add appropriate capital lettters and punctuation. If you wish to do that and repost, I'd be happy to check it further. I also note you have two spelling mistakes.

— Clive

  • Hi, My first reaction is that you need to add appropriate capital lettters and punctuation.
  • If you wish to do that and repost, I'd be happy to check it further.
  • I also note you have two spelling mistakes.
  • Clive
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Hi,

My first reaction is that you need to add appropriate capital lettters and punctuation. If you wish to do that and repost, I'd be happy to check it further.

I also note you have two spelling mistakes.

Clive
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