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Pawan24 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Paragragh wiritng on "it's never too late". is it correct?

Working on weaknesses is far better than running away from them. The right perception and command on words make once life easy and joyful. As folks say, a pen is mightier than a sword. It is never too late to learn words and their use in a sentence. A feeling of self satisfaction will make you proud when your work gets recognized. Additionally, witty comments, good punch lines will adorn your style of writing. The rising attention from readers encourage writer to write new and spicy articles. So, keep working on your weaknesses to emerge as a winner some day in your life.
  

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I have underlined some problems: Working on weaknesses is far better than running away from them. The right perception and command on words make once life easy and joyful. As folks say, a pen is mightier than a sword.

  • I have underlined some problems: Working on weaknesses is far better than running away from them.
  • The right perception and command on words make once life easy and joyful.
  • As folks say, a pen is mightier than a sword.
  • It is never too late to learn words and their use in a sentence.
  • A feeling of self satisfaction will make you proud when your work gets recognized.
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I have underlined some problems:

Working on weaknesses is far better than running away from them. The right perception and command on words make once life easy and joyful. As folks say, a pen is mightier than a sword. It is never too late to learn words and their use in a sentence. A feeling of self satisfaction will make you proud when y
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Thank you for replying. Plz, check the amendments I have made here.

Working on weaknesses is far better than running away from them. The right approach and command on language make (why once is wrong here?) life easy and joyful. As folks say, pen is mightier than a sword. It is never too late to learn words and their use in a sentence. A feeling of satisfaction will make you proud when
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Working on weaknesses is far better than running away from them. The right approach to and command of language make (why once is wrong here?-- It should read "one's"!) life easy and joyful. As folks say, the pen is mightier than the sword. It is never too late to learn words and their use in a sentence. A feeling of satisfaction will make you proud when your wor
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Thank you.
I have a question: You made the following correction:
"The right approach to and command of language make life easy and joyful" why did you use "to" here?
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Approach to and command of -- these nouns require different prepositions. There need be no particular reason, as prepositions often adhere to nouns, adjectives and verbs in idiomatic ways, but I think in this case you can easily see that 'approach' is a movement in the direction of something, and the natural preposition 'to' has been preserved in the metaphoric use of 'appro

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