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I've been watching some of your videos in my copious amounts of spare time. I find what you say interesting, because I know what you say is valid since you have much experience in this topic, and because I find the topic very intriguing and mysterious. There are so many unanswerable questions that many attempt, some poorly and some admirably, to answer. I guess what makes this topic so interesting is that it is utterly perplexing trying to understand someone else's opinions on the topic, so I guess half the enjoyment for people who broadcast their opinions, just as you do, is attempting to draw conclusions and opinions with which everyone or a great number can agree.
I think you do a reasonable job of explaining this topic, and I suppose I enjoy listening to you for that reason. I also enjoy listening to you because I like to compare your attempt at explaining the topic with my attempts, which I've not yet articulated to anyone, probably because I've always been afraid that no one would want to listen to my opinions and conclusions if I spoke to anyone in person. Maybe this is why you have turned to video broadcasting--because on here you can express your thoughts without being interrupted, and without worrying too much that you could be boring some or all of the people listening, because you know that they will stop listening if they wish to, since they won't feel rude because they know you won't know if they have stopped listening.
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