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Hi I have an academic proposal need to be edited. could you help me withit? the proposal is just three pages,double space. Thanks

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Of course we can! A pleasure. Please include it with your post next time. For special help with English grammar, you can also post the difficult sections into the General forum. Here, we like to chat about the structure of the proposal and suggest examples and alternatives.

This is one example of an academic proposal

Academic Proposal for an Independent Study of the Dead Sea Scrolls
http://www.tc.umn.edu/~jewel001/Focus/wsw-18.htm

Introduction

The purpose of my proposed research is to explore records of the Dead Sea Scrolls and the lack of public interest in them, despite their recent availability to the public, by examining the lack of literature about them that exists for the average person. I will focus my research on the works that have been published between 1990 and 2001. In the end I hope to compile information about the Dead Sea Scrolls into a book that will be appealing to the average person.

Problem/Need
In recent years, literature and essays have been published on the Dead Sea Scrolls because information on this great archeological find now is available. For years the contents of and history surrounding these ancient relics were kept under cover. However, now that the information about the scrolls has been brought to the public life and laypeople can obtain works about them, most people are no longer interested in this information. Interest has been quelled by the long delays in the availability of information and by the lack of works that the average person can enjoy reading.

A need for literature that the average person can read about the Dead Sea Scrolls is in high demand.

Solution/Proposal
I propose an independent study program that would examine the works written on the subject of the Dead Sea Scrolls written between the years 1990 and 2001. I will examine these works specifically because of their recent publication dates and the fact, therefore, that they have the probability of being the most accurate. By examining these works, I can compile information on the Dead Sea scrolls into a book that can be read and understood easily by the everyday person, a book which will, hopefully, make the subject of the Dead Sea Scrolls come alive for more people.

Plan/Schedule
I propose that my independent study course run for five semesters: two fall and spring semesters and one summer semester. This is an estimated amount of time for accomplishing a project like this. With three semesters in the first year and two in the second, my time will be divided as follows: List of 3 items • Beginning in the fall, in the first two semesters I will research and compile information. • The third semester, the summer semester, I will start the beginning of the rough draft of the book. •

In the final two semesters, I will revise and edit the final draft of the book. list end

Results/Outcome
The results of this independent study course will be a book about the Dead Sea Scrolls that will be appealing to the average layperson. Such a person will then have a book about the Dead Sea Scrolls that is not garbled with scientific lingo of which most people have no working knowledge. Another outcome will be that once people have read my book, more will be interested in reading other, more scholarly books that now exist.

Conclusion
As a student with an archeology major at Inver Hills Community College, I would find this independent study ideal because it would help me in this field of study. It also would help others who may be thinking about going into the field of archeology. With more people interested in this field, more discoveries can be made and our understanding of our history can be made clearer. And if our understanding of the past is improved, then we can better prepare for tomorrow.

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