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Namsteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Panoramic view
- When we got to Honolulu beach, we could felt the comfortable air and cool sea wind. We rent a hotel to store lugguage and rested for a while. Our room had wide windows so we could see the panoramic view of Honolulu.
- Are there sentences natural to write?
Thank you very much!
Namsteven
- Are there sentences natural to write?
Thank you very much!
Namsteven
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When we got to Honolulu beach, we could feel the comfortable air and cool sea wind. ] We rent a hotel to store lugguage [The tense should be "rented", but you don't "rent" a hotel. ] and rested for a while.
- When we got to Honolulu beach, we could feel the comfortable air and cool sea wind.
- ] We rent a hotel to store lugguage [The tense should be "rented", but you don't "rent" a hotel.
- ] and rested for a while.
- Our room had wide windows so we could see the panoramic view of Honolulu.
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When we got to Honolulu beach, we could feel the comfortable air and cool sea wind. ["sea breeze" is a common phrase that you may prefer to use instead, provided it was only a light wind.] We rent a hotel to store lugguage [The tense should be "rented", but you don't "rent" a hotel. You can "book into" a hotel, but you don't do this primarily to "store luggage" and it seems a bit weird to
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