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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Paint seascape
Please check the following paragraph.
This is my grandfather, and his sign is Leo. He wears a brown hat, a brown sweater and blue pants. He is an artist. He is painting the beautiful seascape by the sea.
This is my grandfather, and his sign is Leo. He wears a brown hat, a brown sweater and blue pants. He is an artist. He is painting the beautiful seascape by the sea.
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What about it? People have to start asking clearly. Anyway...
- What about it?
- People have to start asking clearly.
- Anyway...
- Though there seems to be nothing wrong, there can be improvements.
- For example, you should add another comma to your list (brown sweater, and blue pants).
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What about it? People have to start asking clearly. Anyway... Though there seems to be nothing wrong, there can be improvements. For example, you should add another comma to your list (brown sweater, and blue pants). From what I've learned, the only time to not include a comma in the last to items in a list is when all the items in the list are one word long. Names also count as one word. The firs
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