of a once mighty ruler Note that 'visage' refers to the statue's face, not its body, so you may wish to rework your third paragraph. Most of your comments merely explain in prose the meanings of the poetic phrases; I suspect that your teacher wants more. Why does the poet hear this tale from a third party (the traveller, line 1)?
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