It is true that nowadays, economically and technically advanced nations, often face a serious problem, which is population explosion. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and should be tackled by some effective solutions from the government and individuals.
According to the researcher, urban overpopulation has caused serious problems for audiences, namely the people living and the countries in this situation as well as the earth life. It is the fact that in wealthy countries, the rate of people who live in poverty are becoming increasingly People have more chances of their jobs, it also means that there are more and more factories arising as well. Therefore, pollution from smoke, wastewater, rubbish, … is unavoidable, affecting health’s people such as bronchitis or pneumonia. Another problem is that in overcrowded countries, overpopulation will trigger social unrest such as looting, terrorism, the serious shortage of food and water; and unemployment. Especially, the Earth will be threatened if this situation continues. For example, the Earth will appear global warming, melting polar ice caps, changing climate patterns, rising sea level, and environmental pollution.
In terms of solutions, I believe the government should be largely responsible. Firstly, the state must provide essential housing and healthcare for all its citizens. Secondly, they must educate people about limiting the size of the family. For instance, in China they have a policy called the “ one-child policy” which limits the size of the family to one or two children, this is beginning to affect the world’s most crowded nation. Naturally, individuals should also try to address this problem. The most important is that citizens have to raise awareness regarding family planning and know about serious after-effects of overpopulation, which can help curb population growth.
To sum up, people and the Earth will have to face the inevitable consequences when the population grows at a rapid pace. And there are also appropriate steps that need to take to these problems, not only by the government but also by individuals.
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