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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Overcome/Sorrow
Could you be so kind to give me your comments whether the grammar and the usage of the words are correct in the below sentence.
"I have some doubts about that because my previous interview was regarding a permanent position which I overcame 3 interviews in total to reach the latest one but resulted in a sorrow of a getting turned down for the position due to another candidate who knows Spanish that was an advantage for the position."
"I have some doubts about that because my previous interview was regarding a permanent position which I overcame 3 interviews in total to reach the latest one but resulted in a sorrow of a getting turned down for the position due to another candidate who knows Spanish that was an advantage for the position."
Top answer
Geez, Doubts about what?? Nobody wants to read a long sentence like this! Start out by breaking it up into a few simple sentences.
- Geez, Doubts about what??
- Nobody wants to read a long sentence like this!
- Start out by breaking it up into a few simple sentences.
- That should go a long way toward helping the reader understand what you're talking about.
- Then we can have another look.
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Geez,
Doubts about what??
Nobody wants to read a long sentence like this! Start out by breaking it up into a few simple sentences. That should go a long way toward helping the reader understand what you're talking about.
Then we can have another look.
Doubts about what??
Nobody wants to read a long sentence like this! Start out by breaking it up into a few simple sentences. That should go a long way toward helping the reader understand what you're talking about.
Then we can have another look.
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