Although the era of smart phones have made children learn more information than before, they have some disadvantages over children, so we need to control our children while they're using their smart phones in order to have a well-balanced life.
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Although the era of smart phones has enabled children to learn more than before, these devices have some disadvantages. We need to control our children while they're using their smart phones so their lives will be well balanced.