Adam picks Gordon up and runs with him through the door, crashing (out) into the corridor. They land on the floor where Adam punches Gordon some more before running away.
Is it okay either with or without "out"?
Is the rest OK?
Hi Either is good. I think I would include 'out'. He runs through the door and crashes out into the corridor, landing on the floor.
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Hi
Either is good. I think I would include 'out'. He runs through the door and crashes out into the corridor, landing on the floor. I think the 'out' is right, making it slightly more dramatic.
Dave