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Pamela81 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Our model for offers

Dear teachers,

how do you call in English the special models used for the "paperwork" (invoices, offers etc) ? I hope you understand what I mean, usually I keep one model on my desktop and then fill it with the customers details.

In this model, there is written the following sentence: "We take pleasure in presenting you the offer for the erection of the stand in....." so my question is if this sentence can work. I have never heard before "to take pleasure" and why using "erection" and not "construction" ?
I did not write this model , it was my boss. Can you check it please?

Thank you!

Pamela
  

Top answer

I would never use "pleasure" and "erection" in the same sentence. It could be a source of embarrassment and even ridicule. We are pleased to provide you with our estimate for the costs of constructing the stand you have requested.

  • I would never use "pleasure" and "erection" in the same sentence.
  • It could be a source of embarrassment and even ridicule.
  • We are pleased to provide you with our estimate for the costs of constructing the stand you have requested.
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I would never use "pleasure" and "erection" in the same sentence. It could be a source of embarrassment and even ridicule.

We are pleased to provide you with our estimate for the costs of constructing the stand you have requested.
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Hi John,

thank you for the reply.

Really??!!!!!???? Oh my ***!!! Imagine that we have been using this kind of model (correct ? model for offers?) for 10 years!!! I think I must talk with my boss and ask him to change it.

Do you mean that erection is not appropriate word when referred to a stand?

In Italian language I can say "erezione" meant like "build a stand"
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Hi Pamela,

Maybe "template" would work instead of "model". But, I understood what you meant when you said "model" (at least I think I did).

Do you mean that erection is not appropriate word when referred to a stand? NO, I mean that I would not use the words "erection" and "pleasure" IN THE SAME SENTENCE. That's all.

There is nothing wrong with
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Dear John,

thank you for the explanation. Now it is clear!

I could not imagine that the word "pleasure" and "erection" might cause embarass if put together.

Template is OK, I have checked the dictionary and I think it is the right word! Thank you!

The rest is clear.

Best regards!

Pamela
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JohnParisnever use "pleasure" and "erection" in the same sentence.
For a second, the presence of these two word flashed a wild image before me..
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Pamela81,

I am taking a wild guess....
When you said "model" in that context, Do you mean "pattern" ?
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Hi!

no, template is the word I needed. John has suggested it in his last post.

Btw I was very surprised by the ambiguous meaning it can suggests the words "erection" and "pleasure" when they are put together.... I didn´t know that in English is so confusing...

Thank you

Pamela

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