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00If given a the opportunity to study MSN through scholarship in the US will you be interested to pursue it? why?02br
00Yes, of course.It's a great opportuinity for me to study MSN program in the US as a scholar. Not anybody had been given the chance to pursue one's career in a land of milk and honey.As a nurse i would wanted to acquire more knowledge in Nursing by taking MSN in the US if given the option.Before i thought of this move in my nursing career, to augment more knowledge and skills, unfortunately, i don't have enough money to support my ambition. Im a single mother would willingly wanted to try new endeavor so that i could be financially stable.By that, i have the capability to support my son's education until he finish his studies. I will be forever grateful if i will be given the chance to pursue Nursing in the US.So far im satisfied with my job now but i want to try to be a MSN scholar in the US.Hopefully if i will be qualified i dreamt of sharing my expertise in nursing to my fellow nurses and uplift the nursing standards in my beloved country. 0-
  

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02del 00 01u 00Not anybody02u 00 01u 00had been given02u 00 the chance to pursue 01u 00one's02u 00 career in 01del 00a land of milk and honey02del 00. As a 01u 00nurse i 02u 00would 01u 00wanted02u 00 to acquire more knowledge in Nursing by taking MSN in the US 01del 00if given the option02del 00. By that, i 02u 00have the capability to support my son's education until he 01u 00finish02u 00 his studies.

  • 02del 00 01u 00Not anybody02u 00 01u 00had been given02u 00 the chance to pursue 01u 00one's02u 00 career in 01del 00a land of milk and honey02del 00.
  • As a 01u 00nurse i 02u 00would 01u 00wanted02u 00 to acquire more knowledge in Nursing by taking MSN in the US 01del 00if given the option02del 00.
  • By that, i 02u 00have the capability to support my son's education until he 01u 00finish02u 00 his studies.
  • I will be 01del 00forever02del 00 grateful if 01u 00i will be02u 00 given the chance to pursue 01del 00Nursing02del 00 in the US.
  • 01del 00So far02del 00 01u 00 im02u 00 satisfied with my job now but i want to try to be a MSN scholar in the US.
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00Yes, 01del00of course02del00.It's a great 01u00opportuinity02u00 for me to 01u00study MSN02u00 program in the US 01del00as a scholar.02del

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