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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Opinion on a paragraph
Can somebody please help me the English?
Regards,
Fizzi
Obviously, the IMP code of conduct does support the appropriate use of medicines. However, up to now, little research has been done to analyse whether this is implemented in nutraceutical advertisements in nursing journals. To our knowledge only two studies have been conducted on this issue; one was conducted in the UK and one in . The latter study was published recently and not included in our review. Therefore, future research should examine the association between information provided in nursing journal advertising and appropriateness of prescribing given the paucity of this information.
Regards,
Fizzi
Obviously, the IMP code of conduct does support the appropriate use of medicines. However, up to now, little research has been done to analyse whether this is implemented in nutraceutical advertisements in nursing journals. To our knowledge only two studies have been conducted on this issue; one was conducted in the UK and one in . The latter study was published recently and not included in our review. Therefore, future research should examine the association between information provided in nursing journal advertising and appropriateness of prescribing given the paucity of this information.
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A couple of suggestions: Obviously, the IMP code of conduct does support the appropriate use of medicines. However, up to now, little research has been done to analyse whether this is implemented in nutraceutical advertisements in nursing journals. To our knowledge , [add comma] only two studies have been conducted on this issue; one was conducted in the UK and one in Y.
- A couple of suggestions: Obviously, the IMP code of conduct does support the appropriate use of medicines.
- However, up to now, little research has been done to analyse whether this is implemented in nutraceutical advertisements in nursing journals.
- To our knowledge , [add comma] only two studies have been conducted on this issue; one was conducted in the UK and one in Y.
- The latter study was published recently and is/was [depending on how immediate/recent you want your review to sound] not included in our review.
- Therefore, given the paucity of this information, future research should examine the association between the [optional I guess, but I prefer it] information provided in nursing journal advertising and the [required] appropriateness of prescribing given the paucity of this information .
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A couple of suggestions:
Obviously, the IMP code of conduct does support the appropriate use of medicines. However, up to now, little research has been done to analyse whether this is implemented in nutraceutical advertisements in nursing journals. To our knowledge, [add comma] only two studies have been conducted on this issue; one was conducted in the UK and one in Y.
Obviously, the IMP code of conduct does support the appropriate use of medicines. However, up to now, little research has been done to analyse whether this is implemented in nutraceutical advertisements in nursing journals. To our knowledge, [add comma] only two studies have been conducted on this issue; one was conducted in the UK and one in Y.
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