Opinion Essay

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Topic:

It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Currently, the more developed the Internet is, the more benifit it brings, and one of the most advantagous on the Internet is providing information. Although some people state that the Internet gives us variety of news, I truly believe that we should search for communication in other tools.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that the Internet has several advantages. One of the best pros is that it provides information conveniently. We can access to communication everytime, everywhere as long as having the Internet. In addition, we may know all the news on Earth regardless of far distance. Another benefit is information on the Internet is free and it has fast speed. Other tools make available for communication, such as newspapers or magazines, require people to wait daily, and get it in bookstores. We, therefore, can save our money, and time when we use the Internet to find news.

On the other hand, the Internet is not the best way to look for communication; whereas, there are numerous places giving better news, such as newspapers, books or magazines. All of these tools supply more strict information than on the Internet; addtionally, it is controlled and fixed by publishing companies. If you do not have a lot of money, you can borrow books from libraries, which offer various academic books with trustwothy communication. For this reason, newspapers or books always keep their own audience, despite the popularity of the Internet.

In conclusion, I suppose that not only we use the Internet, but also we should find in other places to make sure the information correctly.